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So...well...it might hurt, but it's not your best work. I've got some objections with regard to a few things. What is most visible and is most important for me - Rarity's head seems to be too oblate. She looks like a potato actually, I don't even know what to compare it with. It's also too big for this small body and too humanized (this last thing is just a personal taste).
Secondly, it's such a shame you didn't included the inside of her eye. There should be a nice expression, but we've got a white blank instead. She looks a bit weird without it. I know you tried to give her an impression of being scared, but I think it could have been made better with it.
The rest is roughly fine. The overall idea is bright and the mouses (which I think are the best things in this drawing) are well-made.
Ficou muito bom!